WP reverse outline extra credit

Para#	Main Idea / Summary
Intro	Peter Luger Steak House located in New York, La Stalla in Newtown, and Applebees in Newtown, each tailor their dinner menus towards a specific audience and have certain details that are specific to each.
Body paragraph 1	Peter Luger Steak House menu The simplicity of the menu, yet deliciousness of the food.
Body paragraph 2	La Stalla’s menu The difficultness of the menu being largely in another language.
Body paragraph 3	Applebees menu The versatility of the menu, and the wide audience it reaches.
Conclusion	Brings it together Restate thesis: Peter Luger Steak House located in New York, La Stalla in Newtown, and Applebees in Newtown, each tailor their dinner menus towards a specific audience and have certain details that are specific to each.

For WP 1 I stuck to what had been drilled into my mind all throughout high school, and I organized my paper in the common five paragraph format. Each of my genres I used as one of my body paragraphs. I believe that this organization was the major downfall of my paper. For my next attempt at WP 1 I plan on not using the five paragraph format and used more, so that I avoided large paragraphs and the reader could digest my paper better. I also should have designed each of my reasons as a major difference I noticed among all three examples. This would have allowed me to compare and contrast the three examples a lot more than the way I did it. The design I made really lacked much contrasting among examples at all. I also plan on using a lot more direct evidence from my sources next time. I plan to do this because evidence is the main way to strengthen an argument of a paper. In my first attempt of the paper I had little direct evidence from the examples, which made my argument very weak causing it to lack argue ability. Finally, for my next attempt I plan to switch out my example of Peter Luger Steak House for a third Newtown restaurant. I would also tweak my thesis to reflect the change of my third example. I would change it to include how the three restaurants in Newtown each have unique things about their menus that attract the particular audience in Newtown.