Elevator pitch
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Did not meet expectations
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Met expectations
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Exceeded expectations
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Eye contact
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Time limit met
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Talking speed
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Conciseness
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Preparedness
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PowerPoint slides
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Did not meet expectations
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Met expectations
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Exceeded expectations
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Slide 1 questions answered
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Slide 2 questions answered appropriately, citation for article 1 done correctly
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Slide 3 questions answered appropriately, citation for article 2 done correctly
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Slide 4 introduced correct Penn state professor
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Slide 5 Discussion questions were relevant and started a worthwhile conversation
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Grammar and conventions
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Video 1: in the first example the girl seemed very nervous which may turn off a potential investor in the business. In the second elevator pitch the man effectively posed a problem in society and quickly came up with a solution to the problem very quickly. The third example while it seemed very well rehearsed and prepared, it seem too rehearsed. The person was too stiff, and obviously showed that they were reading from a script and appeared unnatural.
Video 2: In this video the girl seemed to come off as very personable and well mannered to the possible investor. The girl also really captured the potential investors attention with the possible project idea. Finally, she efficiently addressed a problem and came up with a solution. The only downside to this presentation was that the whole situation seemed too fake and well rehearsed to be relatable to a real life situation.
Video 3: In this video the women did a great job in introducing herself and giving through information on the purpose of the speech in the limited amount of time. The only negative about the pitch was that she was not looking directly at the camera which was her audience, which made it seem like she was reading off of script.
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